User:Tmp1071/Populus tremuloides/Digi227Bravo Peer Review

General info
Tmp1071
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tmp1071/Populus tremuloides
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Populus tremuloides

Evaluate the drafted changes
1."spanning across 43 hectares" good addition

2. Good job adding the citation at the bottom of Ecology section.

3. I see you're working on adding some work to the dieback section. Good work finding a citation for the opening sentence about increased mortality noticed in the 1990s.

4. Is your intention to add your paragraph to existing section, or replace it with what you have? I think the information in the existing section is interesting and relevant, but adding what you have will be a good addition.

5. The paragraph you're working on about thaw-freeze events and climate records, is a good add. Well cited also.

6. More citations are needed in the "Uses" section. You could add some more information here.

7. I'd also like to see a few more facts added to the Culture section.

8. The article is in pretty good shape already. Well organized with only minor gaps in citations. Continue adding concise and relevant information and this article will be great.