User:Tmx5027/Selfishness/IRiptide Peer Review

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Tmx5027
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 * Selfishness:
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Even though it is a very small addition to the article, I feel there could be more examples that could be provided. Having the wild dogs example is great, but I feel there should be some other examples, such as what selfishness could look like across multiple communities and multiple organisms. I think having a human example would be easier for some readers to understand in an ecological sense. Alongside that, maybe explain what ecology is for readers who do not know the definition of ecology alongside of giving an example of what ecology looks like in a broad and specific sense.

This is just a bit of a grammar suggestion, when it says "which would considers as a mutualistic behavior", I suggest changing the wording to possibly be "which could be considered mutualistic behavior" or something along that line. Either way, the 's' at the end of 'consider' should not be there.