User:Tmx5027/Selfishness/JoeDer415 Peer Review

I believe that your edits were a great contribution to this page, but included some minor grammatical errors. below is your edit with all of the same information that you included, just in a grammatically correct format.


 * In Ecology, species will sometimes cooperate with each other. This is considered mutualistic behavior. Some species choose to utilize mutualistic behaviors due to the benefits they might receive as a result. This ultimately is a selfish behavior. An example of animal cooperation would be communities of wild dogs. Certain wild dog species work together, which helps them hunt larger prey. During said hunt, each individual would be assigned a role. These roles could include, but are not limited to, chasing their prey towards a cliff. This would help make other individuals easier to hunt.

These edits that I made to your original paragraph did not add any more information than what was previously stated. As for the information actually included in your statement, I believe it is not focused enough on the overall goal of the article. Providing more examples of selfish behaviors in the animal kingdom would better help get the ecology side of things included in this article.

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