User:Tmzyang/Deng Jiaxian/Anksen Peer Review

General info
Tmzyang
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Skidmore_College/Physics_and_Society_(Spring_2024)/articles/edited?showArticle=666913916
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Deng Jiaxian

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article was heavily edited. The lead section was expanded to include personal life and contributions, which helps give the article a more comprehensive introduction. The early life section was added to give life before college, which is of good reference. Career expands on content already there, and provides more detail, making the section more comprehensive. Personal life includes details about the cultural revolution, which was a large event and should be included.

Publications need citations.

Interestingly, no new citations were added, so the article did not become more comprehensively cited. It could be worthwhile to find more sources to increase the reliability of the article.