User:Tnmaddie/The Arcade Restaurant/Vebrown Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tnmaddie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tnmaddie/The Arcade Restaurant


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * I think the lead of this article is a nice introduction into this article by mentioning some key details about it.
 * Change the second time you say through to a different word, the word throughout to begin the sentence

Content


 * In the history section Martin Luther King Jr's assassination seems kind of out of place. I suggest adding some more background information to make it fit better or remove the reference. For instance why would that make business decline, not obvious to outside readers.
 * Due to your topic being a restaurant you could add a section taking about the types of food it serves

Tone


 * There are some words that lead to non-neutral statements accidentally. For example the word delicious in the accomplishments section, I suggest being careful and switching some of the words to make it a more neutral stance.

Sources


 * You don't have anything in your references section, don't forget to put source links in the work it self
 * Try to see if you can get more sources to further make your article a bit better

Organization


 * I think the organization in this article is really good, I definitely like how history is set before the accomplishments section

Overall Impression


 * I think the article is very good overall! It is a good topic and adds information about an important thing in Memphis to Wikipedia. While some more work has to be done to make the article the best it can be it's mostly small changes and things I think you should be able to do no problem, good work!