User:Toaddoesnot/Hyper-casual game/Anan lyz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Toaddoesnot


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Toaddoesnot/Hyper-casual_game?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Toaddoesnot/Hyper-casual_game/Anan%20lyz_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)