User:Toaddoesnot/Hyper-casual game/Thustall Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Toaddoesnot/


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Toaddoesnot/Hyper-casual game


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The expansion of genres/mechanics is a great addition, as is the clarification that genres and mechanics are often the same thing due to the simplicity of the game itself.

The intro paragraph would benefit from a rewrite as there are a few claims like "some say these games…" without a citation to back it up. How these games make a profit should also be turned into a subsection as it appears you're in the process of doing.

The second paragraph of the "history" section should be contextualized or removed. It refers to "this year" and the current list of top-downloaded games, but there is no way of the reader knowing if this is info from 2022 or several years ago.