User:Tobeornottobe1/1-Deoxy-D-xylulose 5-phosphate/Urunne Peer Review

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Peer Review: Urunne

After reading your contributions on 1-deoxy-d-xylulose 5-phosphate in your Wikipedia article, I felt like the information you provided was very clear and concise. Your Lead clearly stated what this enzyme was but did not include a description of what would be discussed in the article. However, the article is relatively short and does not need a summary of its content.

The content you added is incredibly relevant to the topic. You explained the function of your enzyme of focus and the pathways that it is involved in. I would only suggest that you proof read your content as there are some minor grammar mistakes. For example, you wrote that, "In addition, the molecule is involved in making of thiamine (Vitamin B1) and pyridoxol (Vitamin B6)." In this instance, you can remove the word "of" to enhance the clarity of this sentence. By looking at your sources, your information seems up to date, as your sources only use data that has been produced over the past 20 years. Additionally, the tone of your content is incredibly neutral and does not suggest any bias. No particular viewpoint is overrepresented and there does not appear to be an attempt to persuade the reader towards any direction.

Overall, your contributions are incredibly easy to read and are very clear! The sources are reliable, current, and thorough. The organization of the article is visually appealing and is clear as well. You did very well!

Again, I would only suggest reading over your writing to fix minor grammatical errors and maybe adding images if any seem helpful. If you do, make sure to verify that they adhere to Wikipedia's copyright guidelines.