User:Tofu jail/Jung Yeondoo/Poppyprint Peer Review


 * Make sure you add proper citation to each sentence! You have gathered an excellent array of sources (very impressive!). Note that Hyo-won Lee's last name is Lee - you might want to change the order in the bibliography (since all other authors follow last name - first name).

* This is a very promising base! However, I think some of the contents could be expanded a bit more by taking full advantage of your current English-language sources.

* Make sure you link any relevant Wikipedia pages. For example, MOMA could be linked; the Tohoku earthquake could be linked as well (and many more...)

Bio - do we have his graduation date?

Work - put in chronological order

'''Content: I am curious to see that you have left out his earlier work before 2000. You could include the Evergreen Terrace series here, for example, which is discussed in Korean Art From 1953.'''

84 minute -> 84-minute

This video was also shown at NY MoMA and was inspired by an attempt to relocate a view of the Taebaek Mountains (I think you should provide some additional information on the significance of Taebaek Mountains here, and if it's on Wikipedia, link it) (Hyo-Won Lee). His second piece, Twilight Seoul (8:40) is a collaboration with fellow artist, Luka Fineisin. They create a panorama of Seoul with (-> using) remains from Jung’s studio (as material), like cardboard boxes and broken electronics along with lights and a smoke machine as they discuss the choices on camera (Stevens).

His exhibition Just Like the Road across the Earth at Japan’s Art Tower Mito (when??) contains work like (-> change to includes) Blind Perspective (2014), Boramae Dance Hall (2001), and Six Points, Ordinary Paradise (2010). These works center around the landscape lost in the 2011 Tōhoku earthquake and tsunami. (are these photographs? Specify medium if you can?)

* You should include his most recent award! I emailed you about this before.

https://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20230307000770

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