User:Tofu jail/Min Chung Sik/Td1935 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Reviewing User:Tofu jail's Min Chung Sik article.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tofu%20jail/Min_Chung_Sik?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Bibliography: Edit 3rd reference also to Chicago style. Add a small bullet point under the citation explaining but the source is and how it contributes.

Lead: Provides a good understanding of Min Chung Sik, but is a little too long as the Lead. Would suggest including this description under 'Bibliography' in a subsection like 'Early Life'. Would also suggest double checking for minor grammatical issues related to the use of commas and periods.

Article Body: Content is great, but would suggested maintaining a more neutral and slightly less biased tone, and organizing the body into subsections.

References: Relevant references, but would suggest citing within the writing as well.

Images: Would recommend including images of his work later when developing the article.

Enjoyed reading your article and excited to see the end product!