User:ToharZamir/Ethnic enclave/Jimzhen21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? ToharZamir
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ToharZamir/Ethnic_enclave?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethnic enclave

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Very concise, the content is well discussed and explained. No issues with the citation.

Good job!