User:ToharZamir/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Ethnic Enclaves

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose Ethnic Enclaves specifically because of the emphasis on local economic structures that accompany it. Ethnic Enclaves are typically hosts of self-sufficient economic subdivisions from the overarching economy, which are predicated on the unique interplay between interdependent members of the community. The article came off as strong and nuanced.

Evaluate the article
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The lead section effectively summarizes the multiple aspects of ethnic enclaves' relationship with the individuals that comprise them. While I felt that the article very neatly explains the ideal of economic opportunity for members of the community via participation in their local economy under the sub-header "Enclave economy hypothesis," I would have preferred to see an expanded amount of content in this area. Also beneficial would be a link to an external page for "economics of ethnic enclaves," or something of the sort. Even with that limitation, the "Economics" subsection is a bit confusing as it seems unnecessarily separated from the "Enclave Economy hypothesis," perhaps it would work better to nest the latter within the former. That being said, the article as a whole was well-cited and often-edited, making for a reliable source. While this article is well-developed, well-referenced, and generally reliable, I believe that improving the structure could make for a reading experience more conducive of understanding.