User:Tolber2K/Psychosis/Gsch23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tolber2K


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tolber2K/Psychosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey there! Unfortunately, there wasn't terribly much in the sandbox of your changes that I could peer review so I went ahead and looked at the published article. Maybe go through and make sure all the information that's currently in there is necessary for the article, but the biggest thing I'm seeing is that the organization of the article could maybe be rearranged a little bit to flow better. I hope this helps a little bit, but keep up the great work!