User:Tolber2K/Psychosis/Kayoff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tolbert2k


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tolber2K/Psychosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article seems to already have a lot of content to it. I think starting with negative symptom sections that you are currently editing it a good start since it have a warning banner. While the writing is already pretty neutral, I think rewording some of the statements can help in making it easier to read. The idea of further expanding and comparing the positive and negative symptoms also seems like it would be very helpful in adding to your article. Adding examples of these can also help to make the section easier to read for people without as much knowledge on the topic. The citations seemed to be relevant to the topic and up-to-date. You could consider looking at more medical references to help the articles verification. It could be interesting to also add more the the research section of the article and maybe discuss certain groups in relation to psychosis to help with equity gaps!