User:Tolber2K/Psychosis/Psychcap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Tolber2K
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tolber2K/Psychosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would suggest starting with the lead. It seems unclear what part of the article yo are working on without looking at the unrevised article. I don't see any sources yet so that would be helpful to get in there. The tone seems straightforward and factual. SO far what is in the sandbox is organized and put together well. I want to see this flushed out more to see if the information provided helps me understand the other concept talked about or if the current paragraph could maybe be condensed to help with the flow of the article. the content seems relevant to the topic but I cannot tell if it is up to date based on the lack of sources. Overall, lots of detailed information is present in the sandbox and I am interested to see what else is added. I thing organizing your sandbox and brining more info from the current article would help me understand how your changes fit in.