User:Tolber2K/Psychosis/Srivera6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

tolber2k


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tolber2K/Psychosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like how you already have mentioned some of the plan you have to add for the article, where you mentioned discussing diagnosis. I also think that there could possibly be more information to be added regarding treatments.

It also mentions when I click the article that the article is sparse in medical references for verification. I would definitely focus on that. Also, some of the references used are a little outdated. I would check to see if you can back these claims up with more recent sources, or if possibly the information is out of date, as well. If it is, it would probably be best to delete that information.

Lastly, the article describes some of the subtypes of psychosis, but only goes in depth about a couple of them. I wonder if you can maybe find some additional information on the other subtypes, and include that!!