User:Tom Wulfric/Emerillon language/Daniela marinp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tom Wulfric


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tom Wulfric/Emerillon - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Emerillon language - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has clearly been improved to add more content than the original article. The content is relevant, flows nicely and also does not sound biased. The references all seem to come from reliable sources and there is a good amount of them. Citations also seem to be used properly throughout. The article has overall been organized better than the original.