User:Tomasoccer/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
1) Video game

2) Mass shooting contagion

3) Managing the news

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
1) I choose Video Game because it is a really important contemporary aspect in the world of communications and technologies. Also, it is a topic that I might be interested to work in the future.

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3) interesting topic where the topic has not been developed in the page. PLENTY of potential to improve it.

Evaluate the article
1) As I expected, the article exceed my expectations because of multiple reasons. It was well organized, with multiple sections explaining different aspects related to the world of video games. The content was neutral, and focused on showing different aspects of video games. It did not try to convince the reader to pick a side about a better gaming platform or game genre.

The article had multiple images to support the content. Images related to gaming platforms. influential people, and devices among other things. Personally, because Video Games are a topic that I enjoy, it was interesting seeing how the page talked about so many different aspects related to Video Games going from the terminology of Video Games, The History, The Effects on Society, and Controversial Issues, among other things.

The Talk section had plenty of people that are working continuously to improved small issues that the page could fix or simply be improved. Not only grammatical errors but also better images and graphics to improve the content.

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3) Important article topic. However, page lacks of relevant examples and jumps straight into criticism. No graphic content to support any writting.