User:Tomasoccer/Viña del Mar International Song Festival/Lll84 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tomassoccer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tomasoccer/Vi%C3%B1a_del_Mar_International_Song_Festival?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really found the article interesting. I'm just not sure if you are adding to an existing article or you are creating a new one about the awards. either way, i think your theme will make a fine contribution to wikipedia. I think you should add either a citation to el MONSTRUO so people who doesn't know what are you referring to can get an understanding of it. As a South American chap myself, i think people would find it interesting. Also, if the festival already has a main article, i think it would be useful to provide a link to it. one las thing i find, when you are talking about specific data, you should provide a citation so people know where are you getting those facts. Over all, i think this article will be a fine addition to Wikipedia.

Tomassocer answer: I apologize for the confusion about my article. After reading this, I added a small paragraph on top of the page, explaining the purpose of my Sandbox. I also followed your advice and added a link to "El Monstruo," and to the festival's main page on Wikipedia.

Finally, I cited my sources on my article. However, I will have to fix some of them as they are not correctly cited like we learned during training. I mostly added them to the draft to show that I have them. I am going to check the training module about how to cite resources on Wikipedia to be sure I am doing in the right way.