User:Tommygoodwin/Healthcare in Rwanda/Kchiuc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tommygoodwin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tommygoodwin/Healthcare_in_Rwanda?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Healthcare in Rwanda

Lead
Guiding questions:Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

The lead is concise and well-written, could possibly add previews of body paragraphs (Bamako Initiative).

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Yes, the content appears relevant and up to date, with the majority of sources dating from 2022 and 2023. The article addresses gaps in knowledge of non-Western countries.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

The content added appears neutral and presents facts and findings, not analyses. This accurately represents all viewpoints from a neutral stance. One area for improvement is the inclusion of non-academia sources and non-Western sources, as Western academia and NGO literature is biased towards outsider populations (non-African).

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Yes, the content matches the sources and reflect the literature on the topic. The sources also include works by historically marginalized individuals and are peer-reviewed.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

The content is concise and with little to no error.