User:Tommyoconnor16/Jackie savitz/Ncarpenter1805 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jackie Savitz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tommyoconnor16/Jackie_savitz?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Spacing between your two pictures you have placed already is very good and I think that these two pictures are important information relating to her topic and mission. However, as a reader I would also like to put a face to the name! Where you not able to find a head shot? Again, I think the information you have down already is good related information because it expands on her career while explaining how she worked towards her goals. Is there anymore information you could find about early life? Try to find something about why and how she got into saving our oceans, and what she would do in early life before having the platform she has now.