User:Tommytz/Pansori/Rsinthespace Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tommytz


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 * User:Tommytz/Pansori


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Evaluate the drafted changes
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The lead provides basic concept of Pansori music, and the reader can have a general image of what the music is by going through the lead. I think reader would be curious about the traditional musical instruments used in the music type and it's better to include the info in the main body of the article. The content added is relevant to the history and origin of the music but it can be depicted more so that readers can know how the music is related to the culture and how the music has been developed into the modern shape of Pansori. It is better if pictures are inserted, and it will help reader gain more thorough understanding of the music type. Citations will also need to be added where information was provided, then it could have a higher level of credibility.