User:Tomslocumb1/Rhopalium/Peytonw27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)User:Tomslocumb1/Rhopalium


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Rhopalium


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading your article the contact that you added I feel has added and improve the overall quality of the article. The tone of the article is definitely neutral I do feel like you could talk more on how the organisms move along with how they eat. I don't see any grammatical errors but I think the continent is well organized and the beginning hits a lot of major points. The image that was added does represent the indentions that was talked about within the paragraph. Overall I feel like you have a strong standing point that could lead to a very well written Wikipedia page.