User:TonyTheTiger/Ginobili review

This article is off to a great start. If it is reworked it will probably have success improving along the quality scale. Lets start with the lead. Ginobili has enough content to have a 3 paragraph WP:LEAD. Either use the uncited lead (with all necessary details properly cited in the main body) or use at least one citation per paragraph. Make sure everything in the lead is in the main body with at least as much detail or more in the main body.
 * Take the "Having spent. . ." sentence and use it for a 2nd and third para.
 * Find an english language source to supplement (if not replace) Para ti. I think intebasket has the info.
 * In the 2nd discuss his international success.
 * Elaborate on silverware using proper terminology
 * In the 3rd summarize NBA success.

In Family and personal life
 * No comma after Jorge.

Professional Career
 * I might mention how other NBA teams are trying to find similar talents (ESPN)
 * Source backup for Steve Smith statement.
 * Source All-Tournament NBA teammates.
 * Source Ginóbili was named Argentina's top sportsman in the country's main newspaper.
 * "Ginóbili began featuring more regularly for the Spurs" s/b "Ginóbili began to be featured more regularly by the Spurs" and rest of sentence needs to be restructured
 * Source NBA Finals MVP Award voting.

Player Profile
 * For clutch play not playoff pts and rebs averages higher than reg season.

Argentine team
 * Mention tenure with Argentine National team. I.E., he has been a member ever since 1998.

In Jersey #s
 * Use a citation. I see several came from interbasket, but don't see #10.