User:Topazflute/Fire Salamanders/Solarchitect03 Peer Review

General info
Topazflute
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Topazflute/Fire Salamanders
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fire salamander:

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I think the way that you've arranged the article flows much better than the old article.
 * It's a little hard to tell what you've changed but, correct me if I'm wrong, you've only moved stuff around so far and are working on the post embryonic development subsection. If that's the case, good job so far, but if I've missed the edits, perhaps go back and bold them.