User:Topnotchwriter/Biofuel/Mtanner27 Peer Review

General info
Topnotchwriter
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Topnotchwriter/Biofuel
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Biofuel

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The lead section has not had any changes. It is difficult to see what changes have been made, as it is not distinguished. The lead section has a starting sentence that talks about what biofuel is, and how it is produced. The lead section does not specifically describe what will be talked about in the article as it only briefly describes one section that will be talked about. The lead section is concise.

The content added is not distinguished so it is hard to tell what exactly has been added. I have noticed that a section in the original article has been removed.

I am not quite sure if any new information has been added, but as I compared the original article with the Sandbox Draft, I did not see drastic changes in the content. I feel like the organization and addition of new content is necessary. I also believe the deletion of the section terminology was an error as some people may not know everything talked about in this article