User:ToriTrouble/Russian architecture/CIN513 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ToriTrouble


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ToriTrouble/Russian_architecture?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Russian architecture

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello,

In general, your article flows very well and when integrating it into the main article, I find no significant contrast to the other sections in terms of style. The article feels more more 'complete' due to your additions. I recognize the part of the process where going through and adding the citations is not complete, so I will not comment on that. I suggest finding more media for each section to break up the flow and show what you are telling. A few grammatical errors and capitalization errors are present. I see sometimes the words 'Greek' and 'Byzantine' not capitalized in some places but not others. Overall I can see a lot of effort went into this article and I look forward to reading it when it is complete.