User:TorresM16/Social Anxiety

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Torresm16


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 * Social anxiety


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social anxiety

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So far the article is looking really good and it has great potential for a perfect wiki page. Some of the thingsi noticed and like are all the different topics and sections that provide information and content. Some of these sections are Social Anxiety, Stages, Disorder, Sign and Symptoms, Attention Bias, Measures and See Also. Great inforamtion and also described with some examples of Social Anxiety. My sudgestion to imporve the article and make it stronger would be to add more detail while at the same time some images or pictures to help the readers get a better understanding of Social Anxiety. The references and media are on point. Good Job.

whispersarai

I think that the organization of this article is very good and easy to follow along with. However, there are some sections that are fairly short and with little citations. For example, the section of Triggers and Behaviors only has one source and is pretty short. Also in the references, I see many outdated sources. But on the other hand, I am not sure there is more recent material to base the article on. As a whole, this article has a neutral tone and does an excellent job at keeping facts clear, straightforward, and unbiased.