User:Torrin Smith/Fault gouge/Tigitar Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Torrin Smith
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Torrin Smith/Fault gouge

You have a ton of super awesome information added to the article. There are a couple little errors: in the first sentence under "Frictional Properties" you have a double "and and" that could be reduced to one. under your "Temperature" section, you might want to specify 'higher temperature changes' in the first sentence instead of just saying "temperature changes". I think you could add a lot more hyper links for specific terms in your additional writing. You have a lot of terms that people might want to be able to go learn what they mean. If you highlight a term such as "matrix" or "porosity", then click on 'link' at the top(Ctrl+K) you can have it insert the link to that term's page.

I think your additions are structured nicely, everything fits together really well and you've really competed the article to a full extent. Your pictures are a good addition to the article too and you have a ton of good citations.

Excellent work my dude.