User:TotalSustainableFuture/United Airlines/Maloqueiro99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) TotalSustainableFuture

Link to draft you're reviewing


 * User:TotalSustainableFuture/United Airlines
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * United Airlines
 * United Airlines

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead concisely and clearly describes the article's topic and includes an introductory sentence that reflects the new content added by the peer. It also includes a brief description of the article's major sections, and there is no information that is not present in the article. Overall, the lead is well-organized.The content added is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. It also includes information on United Airlines' environmental initiatives, which is missing from the original article. The new content is well-organized and easy to read. However, the article does not address any of Wikipedia's equity gaps.The content added is neutral and presents the information objectively. There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position, and there are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented. The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. The content accurately reflects what the cited sources say, and the sources are thorough and current. However, the sources could include more diverse authors, including historically marginalized individuals.The content added is well-written, concise, clear, and easy to read. There are no grammatical or spelling errors, and the content added is well-organized into sections that reflect the major points of the topic.The content added improves the overall quality of the article by providing more information on United Airlines' environmental initiatives. The strengths of the content added include its relevance, objectivity, and organization. The content could be improved by including more diverse sources.