User:Totoama/Colombian Communist Party/Fudgevillain Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Totoama


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Totoama/Colombian Communist Party
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Colombian Communist Party

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is definitely on-topic and takes a neutral tone. It is concise. Overall, this would make for a good contribution to the Wiki page you are editing. However, I did spot one minor grammatical error: "PCC leadership, joined by guerilla leaders, established las "Fuerzas Armadas Revolucionarias de Colombia—Ejército del Pueblo" or Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia (FARC)." I think the word "las" either has to go inside the quotation marks, or should be changed to "the". Also, I feel like any words not in the same language as the rest of the work should generally be italicized. For example: "PCC leadership, joined by guerilla leaders, established the "Fuerzas Armadas Revolucionarias de Colombia—Ejército del Pueblo" or Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia (FARC)."

I do think it might be better if you provided internal Wiki links to some of the more specific topics you mention, if they exist. For example: "La Violencia", "La Frente Nacional", General Gustavo Rojas Pinilla, and "Fuerzas Armadas Revolucionarias de Colombia—Ejército del Pueblo" might all be good things to provide links to, so that the reader can hover over the link and get a quick synopsis of the topic. Your sources look pretty good as far as I can see, but I think you will definitely need to find more if your contribution to this page is going to grow.

That being said, your contribution has definitely left the article looking more put together/complete. The History section on the original article is formatted in a way that's very strange—it feels like the author wrote down the information in bullet points, not complete sentences. Your paragraph approach is much more professional.