User:Totoama/Colombian Communist Party/Gmd114 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Totoama


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Totoama/Colombian Communist Party


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Colombian Communist Party

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the contribution that you are making, comparing the original article to yours, you are including a section of the history behind the Colombian Communist Party which is essential in understanding it as a whole.

The content is backed up by reliable secondary sources. The content is written in a neutral tone, concisely, being easy to read.

I noticed that you included some internal links, I would recommend to link more if possible, for example linking, "La Frente Nacional." As well as when you reference different people in the article., i.e., Gustavo Rojas Pinilla.

For the remaining of this article, I believe there are more sections that you can add to improve the page. You can even try to add a conclusion or an implications section to show why this topic matters.

There are barely any grammar errors that I was able to find. Some mistakes I noticed reads;

"The state opposed the actions of these groups through military violence in attempt to repress the influence of the PCC." I would change, "in attempt" to "in an attempt" to make the sentence more clear.