User:Totoama/Communism in Colombia/Fudgevillain Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Totoama


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Totoama/Communism in Colombia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Communism in Colombia

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Your draft is definitely on-topic and does take a neutral tone. However, just like in the other page you're editing, it might be helpful to use some internal Wiki links for subjects such as: "El Bogotazo", "La Violencia", "Conservative party" [of Colombia, ofc], "La Frente Nacional (National Front)", and "Liberal-Conservative Civil war". Also, I think any Spanish words should be italicized.

As for your sources, I like how they are all more or less current (all from the 2000's). I think there is an opportunity for using more primary sources; getting the stories of some people who lived through this struggle might make your article stronger. I think if you're going to expand your contribution any more, you are definitely going to need more sources in general.

After looking at the original article, I feel like this section could be a bit longer/more detailed. Who were the important players, what were there stories, etc. It's a little difficult to maneuver if there's already a page dedicated to "La Violencia", but I feel like this section would benefit from having a bit more context added.