User:Totoama/Communism in Colombia/Gmd114 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Totoama


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Totoama/Communism in Colombia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Communism in Colombia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: The lead does include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. The article begins with a strong introductory sentence reading "Following the events of "El Bogotazo", a decade long civil war broke out among the Conservative and Liberal factions of Colombian politics. The conflict, which would claim the lives of over 200,000 people, was known as "La Violencia". I think that this makes a good contribution to the page as it better informs the reader about the events that followed "El Bogotazo."

Content: The content of this article is well-written, there is nothing that I would change about it.

Tone and Balance: The content added is neutral. There does not seem to be any bias throughout the article.

Sources and reference: The sources provided are reliable, as you used peer-reviewed sources. The sources are kind of up to date, I'm not sure if there are any newer sources that have been written recently. You used a variety of sources for what you have written so far which is great.

Organization: Article is very well organized. There is little to no grammar errors found within your article. I noticed a small error, in the first sentence of your page, where it reads: "Following the events of "El Bogotazo", a decade long civil war broke out," I would change it to "decade-long" In addition to the last sentence of the page where it says, "with the support of the military, the church and corporations, the National Front effectively surpassed opposition political movements and and any type of political or social reforms." This particular sentence you wrote "and" twice, which was most likely a typo. In the sentence before that, you wrote: "In that time, the new party system led to the consolidation of socio-economic, military, religious and political power." I would add a comma right after the word "religious."

Images and media: There are no images in the article, which I think is something that you can try to add on if possible.

Overall impressions: Your article is off to a great start, I learned a lot about "La Violencia. You referenced multiple reliable sources and wrote about it concisely. There are not many grammar errors at all and everything seems to flow when reading your page.