User:Toygle/Turn A Gundam/Blibly Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Toygle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Toygle/Turn A Gundam


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Turn A Gundam

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good additions and edits to the original, but here are a few things I think could be improved:


 * The original plot summary is fine enough, I don't feel like it needs a rewrite.
 * You could try comparing the differences between the manga and anime versions of this series as well as writer's commentary (if you can find any) on the manga versions.
 * Information about the 2 movie adaptations of the series isn't listed on Wikipedia. You could also add that as a separate section in the article.