User:Tprouty93/Ken Liu/Atallent Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Tprouty93
 * Reviewing: Ken Liu

Lead evaluation
The Lead's introductory sentence does a good job of describing the various roles Liu fills. I would consider revising or moving the second sentence from the Lead since the way it is now does not seem like necessary information to have in this section. The "silkpunk" genre it is important to his story as an author so that is what should be featured more rather than the fact that this work was published. Having his full birth date would be good information to add to the Lead also if that can be found.

Content evaluation
Of the content present, one of the things that needs to be fixed is removing the dead link to his work, "Byzantine Empathy," in the article's info-box and The Redemption of Time in the "Notable English-language translations" section. There are also a few terms that could be linked to Wikipedia articles as well. For example, all of the authors mentioned in the "Childhood and career" section have Wikipedia articles that can be linked to. One of the authors, Liu Cixin, is linked to later in the article, but they are supposed to be linked to on first mentioned so that is something that could be fixed.

Tone and balance evaluation
The article's overall tone is very neutral and has sources to back up most of the information present in the article.

Sources and references evaluation
The IMBD references could easily be updated to include titles of the work it is showcasing so the "Missing or empty title" tag no longer appears. Other than that, the sources present are current are available to be viewed through their provided links.

Organization evaluation
Instead of having two different sections for "Notable" and "Additional English-language translations," I would suggest consolidating them and then backing up why those specific works are notable in comparison to the others to make the article's content more concise.

Overall evaluation
Though there is already a lot of information present, additional sources could be found to build this article further. Images from his adapted works would be interesting to see if that is something available to incorporate into the article. I would also consider continuing or removing the table that was beginning to be added under the "Short stories" section.