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Symptoms of the mood disorder is marked by sadness, inactivity, difficulty in thinking and concentration and a significant increase/decrease in appetite and time spent sleeping. A great deal of people also have feelings of dejection,hopelessness, and sometimes suicidal tendencies. It can either be short term or long term depending on the severity of the person condition.

Major depressive disorder is a mental disorder that can come and go. It affects many people and can be mild or severe. There are several types of depression that has many symptoms. some of those symptoms are sadness, loss of appetite, anger, mood swings. Many people usually feel alone, and have large amounts self doubt.

Randomized controlled trials including around a total of  10,000 children and adolescents (age range 8 to 22 years) deemed at risk for depression

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According to (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC)) 8.1 percent of American adults ages 20 and over had/has depression.

https://www.healthline.com/health/depression

Thesis:Depression is a word that’s thrown around loosely today. But many don’t fully have a proper understanding of it and if left untreated, could lead a person into downward spiral.

Annotation: According to (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC)),8.1 percent of American adults ages 20 and over had/has depression. Major depressive disorder also known as Depression is a mood disorder that causes a continual feeling of sadness and loss of interest. It can affect the way you think, feel, your behavior. Many people have several questions about how to determine depression, along with ways to get rid of it. There are many causes and the symptoms can vary from person to person, leaving emotional and physical problems.

Wenqi's Feedback
What you wrote is repetitive with the content in your Wiki article, section "Signs and symptoms" the third paragraph. So, I am afraid you have to do this again.

Marven's Peer Review
Hey Tassaun, Based I’m reading your sandbox I can tell that you have a very interesting topic. I can also see that you know exactly what you want to talk about. While covering many aspect of depression, you managed to stay organized and explain you topic with very little confusion along with being well written. With more time and expansion on your topic, I think you’ve got a great start.

Josh Lewis Peer Review
I like how you structured your topic and gave me facts about the background. Try to make it less of a informative article and bring some light to it so it doesn't sound repetitive when talking about the topic.