User:Transientchinchilla/Siege of Kars/Ber788 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Transientchinchilla


 * Link to draft you're reviewing. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Transientchinchilla/Siege_of_Kars?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Siege of Kars

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the draft is very detailed and balanced compared to the original.

What the draft is missing - Sources need to added on every sentence that is references the source the statement is coming from currently this draft has no references or source links.

Organization - This article would benefit greatly from more added sub headings as everything is under one sub heading can make following it a lot easier.

Images - The draft has no images could greatly benefit from showing the leaders from the battle with a description

Overall impressions - Really good draft way more detailed than the counter part just needs some organizational and sources to back up the new details.