User:Trentbohan/Manjak people/Dddefne Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

trentbohan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Manjak people
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked your article and I think this is a notable contribution to Wikipedia. Your article is strong in sources, and I liked that you added further reading references. I thought one improvement among subsections could be to make a culture subtitle, and add the Kambatch, religious/spiritual practices, and potentially (although I am not sure whether this is cultural as I don't have research in this) under that subsection as sub-subsections. As of now the flow of the article is a little bit disruptive but it still is great work! Maybe adding an image of a map with population concentration if possible would be useful for readers to be able to visualize the area & demographics.