User:TressaJ/Feminist movement/Jgfell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tressa J


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminist movement
 * Feminist movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? This is such a large topic that everything in the article relates. Nothing was distracting to me.

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? This article has a neutral tone, information based, but needs to be expanded to cover more worldwide thoughts on the topic. It was mentioned on the banner that the tone deals more with the Western culture.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? There is A LOT of room for more information regarding feminist business. Exploring not just businesses that females have begun but what about pioneers that are now running fortune 500 companies, etc.

Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? The link to the main article: History of feminism provides more in depth information regarding the movement. It breaks the stages from inception and how it has grown and changed through the years by giving a much more detailed account of the stages and how they played out world wide.

Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?