User:Trevor008/Víctor Jara Stadium/APC04OU Peer Review

General info
Trevor008
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Trevor008/V%C3%ADctor_Jara_Stadium?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Víctor Jara Stadium:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The addition to the original article is very strong and helpful it makes the article flow and is more insightful than the original article. All the citations are perfect, very strong connections to the article. The common misconception of where he was killed not being cleared up in the article already is kind of funny, shout out to you for clearing that up. Adding the sub-article of what the stadium is like today is really smart and a very strong addition to the article. Overall nothing much I would change, this is a very good addition to this crazy story.