User:Trevor008/Víctor Jara Stadium/HornNest Peer Review

General info
Trevor008
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Víctor Jara Stadium

Lead
Try finding why the stadium was built, and maybe later include why it was selected to detain people? Knowing how the stadium was built and with what materials is frankly distracting from the historical significance of this building, but I'm sure someone loves that it's a steel truss supported roof!

Origins
Are there more photos, floorplans/blueprints of this stadium? The current photos don't do it justice, maybe even a photo of it being used as a detention center, the aftermath, or even today in disrepair.

Use as a detention center
-Maybe use around rather than roughly, try "of those 14,000 detained, 3,000 were killed" and maybe include why or how they were killed? Depending on how long they were detained some people could've died due to lack of basic human necessities.

-Maybe a little more clarity of why Jara was detained? Right now I'm left wondering if it was he was associated with this coup or was it wrong place wrong time, but also why did they single out Jara (that might get too much into his own history and it could just be linked to his article, but wanted to give you the questions that came up while I was reading!)?

-Of the 14,000 peple held at the stadium, were there any notable figures other than Jara that were denained and/or killed? Or do we even know the names of those 14,000 people?

-Was Jara detained in the facilities for athletes, or was everyone kept in the general stadium and seats?

Victor Jara Stadium Today
Is there a way to find why this stadium is not being preserved as a piece of history? Is it lack of funding or a piece of history they want to dissapear? This might get too opinionated, but I'm curious!

General
I overall like the organization, especially the addition of Victor Jara Stadium Today, as it's important to know what happens to these buildings once history has happened in them. I'm guilty of this too, but be mindful this is an informational article and not an essay. Using "Despite common misconception..." to myself reads like a line in an essay proving a point, but that is also just my own opinion.

I'm so excited to see how this turns out! :-)