User:TrevorDriggers/Phthalate/Chazzidy Harper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TrevorDriggers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TrevorDriggers/Phthalate?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phthalate

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead reflects the new content added by TrevorDriggers providing an introductory sentence clearly distinguishing the articles topic also provides an concise but slightly overdetailed description of the articles main sections only directly identifying one of the sections created. I do believe the content added is relevant to the topic of phthalate because phthalates can cause health problems towards humans and other living creatures and the content addresses reproductive effects. The content is synthesized from rather up to date sources which is in a neutral tone. The content added doesn't attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position. The content provided is backed up by reliable secondary source of information written by a diverse spectrum of authors including a source of research taken place un Epe and Lagos Lagoons, Nigeria. The organization of the article provides two well-derived sections that reflect the major points of the topic seen in the lead.