User:TrevorDriggers/Phthalate/Reid Harley56 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TrevorDriggers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TrevorDriggers/Phthalate?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phthalate

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise, well presented, and easy to understand. The article body contains information with citations of various kinds(peer reviewed and checked properly) that are properly formatted. It is split correctly and, if added to the article correctly, would have increased the content added. Every sentence was properly formatted and used the correct citations. This should be added into the main article page. I changed around some of the wording and grammar included.