User:Treyj96/Sport psychology/JasmineG17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Treyj96


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology - Wikipedia
 * Sport psychology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The section that you took out in the part titled renewed growth and emergence as a discipline was a good move. Reading it on the current article I found it confusing and hard to understand. Also, one of the articles was flagged as maybe being unreliable. The section title educational sport psychologist would be a good section to add more to. You could possibly go into more detail on exactly the services they provide for athletes. I found an article that would help in expanding that part of the article. I'm excited to come back and see the changes you make to this article!