User:Treyj96/Sport psychology/Kvhurley28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Treyj96


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Treyj96/Sport_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Trey! First of all, I would like to say that I thoroughly enjoy Sport Psychology as a subject and I was very interested to read your draft of the article. I liked that you added the history of Sport Psychology and mentioned a notable name in the field, Franklin M. Henry, who conducted several studies on other athletes. The strikes you made were effective in that those particular areas were a lot of fluff. While anger management is an interesting aspect of Sport Psychology, I think the article did not go into enough detail about it to keep it in there. Therefore, I liked your decision to cut that part out. Some of the information is dated, but Sport Psychology is not an extensively researched subject, so I know you are working with the resources available to you. I think you used the information wisely to give perspective on Sport Psychology. I would be interested to see which subjects you choose to add to this article. Overall, very well done!