User:TriMinhHuynh/Media and American adolescent sexuality/Ageorgescu1698 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TriMinhHuynh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TriMinhHuynh/Media and American adolescent sexuality


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Media and American adolescent sexuality

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was lack of content written on the Pornography section of the article. Your addition will include more aspects of that area, and it was supported with reliable evidence. Citations were included throughout the draft, and there was balance throughout the content you look to include in the article. I noticed that there were unfinished parts, but I am sure you will have that completed, and it will be as concisely written as your current content.