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The Luftwaffe Experience." United States Air War College. Pg. 1
Modern air combat doctrine places a heavy emphasis on the idea of Air Superiority, and its importance in the ability of an air force to carry out effective operations. Air superiority is defined as a situation in which an air force dominates an airspace to such a degree as to be able to carry out any operations with no interference from enemy air combatants. Fighting an opponent with air superiority in a given battlespace is much harder, as any offensive or defensive tactics are likely to be overwhelmed.

ESCORT DOCTRINE IN WORLD WAR II." United States Air Command and Staff College, pg. 6
In the early stages of World War II, bombing runs  would often take place  often took place without escort fighters. German fighter pilots  would often be  were scrambled to deal with these raids, and soon learned that it was much easier for them to take out formations which were unescorted as opposed to those who were escorted. As a result, fighters  would often attack  attacked bomber formations which were on long range operations, as they  would often  did not have escorts with them. This prompted the United States Army Air Force to come to the conclusion that their B-17 bombers needed to do something to reduce losses, and eventually led to the development of long range escort fighters.

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Peer Review - Jake Aharonian
Both of these sections I believe would benefit the overall message of this wikipedia article. Both of these sections are paraphrased correctly and cleanly. These texts do not repeat any information that is already present in the article. Your sections of text are organized and flow nicely it will make for a smooth read for the audience. For the sections of your article that you are editing I believe these additions will fit in nicely. The tone of these additions is neutral and appropriate and will be accepted by the wikipedia community. Your sources are accurate, relevant, and authoritative. one thing I would say is that they are very current but since your writing about a topic that took place in the 1940s I think you will be okay. Jake 5851 (talk) 20:03, 22 February 2019 (UTC)