User:TrippyVaultBoy/Plague of Athens/F1287 Peer Review

I think this is a good start to editing this wiki. Although there is a lot of information in the existing article, I think it was smart to focus on the hypotheses and claims regarding the spread of the plague in Athens. If you consider to go more in depth on this article, I would advise you write about the general cause of the plague and the inevitability of the rapid spread of plague in Athens. While the information suggests possibilities about the outbreak of the plague in Athens, It seems not provide scientifically verified facts. Have you thought about adding more information about the disease? It may be useful to consult reliable historical books and academic papers on the specific time in Athens. It would be helpful to consider using more sources as well.

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