User:Tristan.lujan/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because Schor is the mayor of Lansing, which is really close to where I live, and it matters because I live near the area so being educated on our mayor is important. My preliminary impression was that he did not have much information on early life.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section in this article was good, it was short but gave all the information I needed and hit main points. Yes, the content is relevant to the topic, and it is mostly up to date with the latest update being this year, and there was not any content that should have not been there. Also, it does relate to a historically underrated population when it comes to Lansing mayors, he is the first Jewish mayor for the city. This article is neutral and does not lean toward anything, it is simply stating the facts about Andy Schor. These facts can be found in external websites that are backed up, and yes, the links work that are provided in the article. When it comes to organization and writing quality, it is very clear and to the point, with every section being properly placed. There are not many images, there is only one, but it is placed well, and I think it is well captioned. To my knowledge there was no other Wikipedia editors talking about this article, and so there are obviously no conversations about it. The article overall is short and to the point, which is good because the facts are clear and do not drag on. I think the article can be improved by talking more about Schor's early life, but besides that the article is complete for the main part and is well-executed.